A Poem About US
Posted Under: Create Amazing Relationships
For our wedding Lou and I asked people to share poems, passages or to write something that they would be willing to share with us about love, marriage, family…
People shared some beautiful thoughts and poems – which I will share with you in future posts.
At night, after the wedding, Lou asked me why we didn’t write something to each other. We had been focusing on our nuptuals. He had difficulty sleeping and when he got up in the morning, he wrote this to me about our journey together – his first poem ever! Who knew he could write so beautifully? I have a feeling there is much more to him…
Let me know your thoughts. Enjoy -
Your partner for success,
Coach Julie, RN ~ Nurturing Your Success
~*~
US
Kids
Children going to school
A friendship is made
Parents
Meeting on a playground
A friendship is born
Trust
Earned as sleepovers come and go
years pass as days go by
Death. Divorce …Change
One moves, another further
Friendship dormant, but never forgotten
Life goes on
Fate
Friendships missed
A knock on the door, one afternoon
Lunch
Friendships strengthened
Realizations revealed
The night my world changed
Thoughts
In my dreams
In my arms
The line is broken
Friendship becomes something more
Is this true
Years pass
Love breaks through
Families unite
Time progresses
The question asked
Rings bought
Finally
The day comes
A day to remember
Me
Confident and successful
You
Confident and successful
US
Forever more
To the love of my life
Reader Comments
Wow!
How wonderful! The poem says it all, so clearly!!
Lou, do you have any unattached brothers (for me)?! (who are equally gifted in poetry writing and romance?!)
Hope the two of you have a long blessed life together!
Mary
Wow. Absolutely profound and beautiful. I would say you are lucky to have each other, except that it is clear that you have co-created this journey together. What an inspiration. Thank you.
Jeanne
Thank you Jeanne. Yes, we have co-created this journey. I don’t know that there is any other way to experience an amazing relationship – both parties have to be partners in its creation. Thanks for sharing!
Thank you Mary! Lou is an only child… but i must say that there are many wonderful men out there. Remember, you only need to find one!